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Prewriting
While the First Amendment gives Americans the right to speak out on
matters of concern, it offers no protection from the ridicule that a printed
ignorant opinion may elicit. Furthermore, it does not guarantee that a
disorganized, incoherent piece of writing will even be read.
Thus, the journalist must first prepare, then write.
- Find a topic. Brainstorm. What controversial
events have been in the news nationally? Locally? In your high school?
(Learn how to find relevant ideas)
- Research. Professional editorial writers know
the value of this step. Computer-assisted research, personal interviews,
news articles on the subject, archives, personal interviews, library
documents and other sources should give the writer an adequate background.
It is virtually impossible to over-research a topic, especially if the
topic is complicated or not generally understood by the reading public.
Remember, there is no audience for an uninformed editorial. (Use
our Research Center)
- Don't always take the easy route. Consider
the less popular stand. Remember the axiom which states the role of
a newspaper is "to comfort the afflicted and afflick the comfortable."
Don't necessarily play Devil's advocate, but don't feel you must represent
majority opinion either. Hold your journalistic ideals high when you
take your editorial stance.
- Take a reasonable approach. Since life has
few absolutes or superlatives, remember to consider the degree and circumstance
of the truth. Generally avoid inclusive words such as "always"
or "never." Be specific and accurate with examples.
Next, the journalist must find and refine the thesis.
The basic skill needed here is the ability to generalize.
What does all the research on the topic indicate is the center of controversy?
Can you state this main idea, or thesis statement, in a clear, simple,
understandable way? Is the topic arguable?
For example, let's suppose you wanted to write an editorial
on the problem of guns being brought
to school:
- Attempt # 1: Guns in school.
This is a weak thesis. It states the general topic, but it is not stated
in a full sentence. Furthermore, it is not an arguable statement.
- Attempt # 2: Guns in school are bad.
Well, better, but still weak. It is not specific. Furthermore, it states
a truth that few people would question, so it is not controversial enough.
Who would possibly take the opposite viewpoint and state that gun-wielding
students and gang members improve the educational atmosphere at a school?
- Attempt # 3: Steps should be taken at
Central High to keep guns away.
We're getting closer. But exactly what steps should be taken? Again,
would anybody question the thesis, or would nearly all readers agree
that a proactive approach to preventing another Columbine High incident
is commendable?
- Attempt # 4: Metal detectors and security
police should be implemented at Central High to prevent shooting sprees
by troubled students.
This is a thesis we can consider. It is an arguable statement. It deals
with a current, relevant societal problem.
Once a workable thesis is developed, the writer must
organize the structure.
Using the researched material, the journalist must now
begin sorting the arguments. Which facts support the thesis? Which argue
against it? Could any be used to argue both sides? Which facts don't directly
relate to either? (This information may be set aside. It is normal to
have much good information that does not relate, and, therefore, must
be saved for another day.)
It's best to make a list, something like this:
Thesis: Metal detectors and security police
should be implemented at Central High to prevent shooting sprees by troubled
students.
Supporting arguments
- Would eliminate guns, knives, other weapons from being
carried into the school.
- Would reduce problem of students sluffing or hanging
around the halls.
- Would improve educational atmosphere where students
could learn without fear.
- Would deter gang activities and violence.
- Would make the school a more attractive workplace
to potential teachers.
- Would be less costly than dealing with potential tragedies
caused by guns in school.
Opposing arguments
- Too costly. Money is badly needed for educational
expenses.
- Inconvenient. Entrance into and out of school would
be slowed.
- Prison atmosphere created.
- Fails to deal with the root cause of violence.
- Not fool proof. Guns could still get into school.
Once all legitimate arguments are listed, the writer
should rank the arguments in each list from most effective to least effective.
This ranking will come in handy later when trying to decide on a concession
and the order arguments should be presented in body of the editorial.
(See explanation below.)
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